Monday, June 2, 2008

journal writing 18 t2

Man is inevitable to avarice and their pursuit for gold is insatisable. They just want more and more. some of the man spent their lock, stock and barrel on stocks. They have overlooked the risk as their mind is only thinking about how much they can earn.They are disgruntled by what they earned and want to earn more as they have earned. Once when the wall street crashed, it caused bedlam throughout the whole world and many went broke and homeless as all the stocks were now useless. They were all eradicated and many were so depressed until they killed themselves. it was sad to hear that and many business closed ad the world was in pandemonium.

1 comment:

Alfie said...

At first glance-you have to watch out for your grammar and capitalization after fullstops etc.
Besides that, good job!

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